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Here I am

Here I am
a shell of the person that I used to be
Broken thoughts and dreams
surounding me
Here I am
a disappointment,
a failure to all... a failure
to my believes
Here I am
alone and afraid,
with no one to turn to.
Here I lay
without feeling, without hope
My breath leaving my body,
suffering no more
I was here,
alone and afraid,
a disappointment to  myself,
but now I'm no more;
I will not breath
I will not love but...
I will also never feel
never yearn,never fear,
never hunger or thirst for things that I cannot attain.
I was here but I will not be for long..

that was a great poem ... karmita :P


una pregunta? aprendiste el español en clases del cole o como?

hey , i hope that it is'nt the way you feel now.
Its a nice poem but from you i prefere something like;
Her i am , this is me
Stronger than before,
Sweater than ever.
......... .

Karma my lovely lady.

Barbie, mis padres son mexicanos y en casa siempre hablabamos en español, ademas mi padre tiene una biblioteca impresionante (es abogado) y ahi aprendi basicamente la gramatica, aunque a veces me falla la ortografia y ademas si notas no se poner acentos !!!  -juasjuas


Zwart baby.... sometimes I feel a little bit sad and tired, but don't think that I'm out of my mind....  just I enjoyed this kind of dark letters. Thnx for your concern.... I love you...kisses -besito

nice letters D  -besito -bye

Pena de mi nivel de inglés, pero lo que leo me gusta, ánimo ...  -besito

I will also never feel
never yearn,never fear,
never hunger or thirst for things that I cannot attain.
I was here but I will not be for long..

 -besito -besito -besito -besito